The Point: The Redemption of Oban Ironbout
by William
E. JeffersonPaper, 208 pages
© 2013 by Port Estillyen Productions
published by Port Estillyen Productions
ISBN 978-0-9856621-2-7
Reviewed November 2013
The blurb on the back of this edition claims
reminders of Bunyan, Lewis, Donne, and Milton.
While it is easy to scoff at such lofty aspirations, as I did, this
claim is not far off the mark. One could
even argue that there is a bit of Tolkein mixed with the author’s own sense of
story-telling. This is truly allegory,
it is a quest story, it used Scripture as a basis for relaying truth and
conflict, it shows good versus evil. In
short, it has all the elements of a classic and only time will tell if it lives
up to that aspiration. The protagonists
are human – probably, though not certainly – and the interactions are plausible, just as
one might expect from Lewis. The use of
allegory is more subtle than Bunyan but just as memorable. The Readings are a retelling of important
Biblical truth as we might have seen from Donne or Milton. The wordcraft is powerful and reflects the
author’s formal education in theology, media, and communications.
The story takes us to Estillyen, the still
place where time seems to have returned to a simpler age, though we are not
completely certain when that age would have been – or even if it would have
been an earthly place. In the best
story-telling fashion, not all the elements that the reader needs are revealed
immediately. Indeed, some are never
revealed. We discover the story as the
protagonists do. As the protagonists do,
we also want to explore and learn more.
We are drawn into the lives of Hollie and Goodwin from the first
page. We want to know more about them,
what the story is, who are these people they meet, what circumstances really
led them to seek refuge on Estillyen.
They are likeable and we develop a strong empathy toward them, just as
the residents of Estillyen do.
There is also a bit of a morality
tale here. Indeed, there is a message
that we are to be stewards of what we have been given. The simple place Hollie and Goodwin are visiting shows the young couple what is
wrong with much of the world they left behind.
The people on Estillyen have adopted a simpler, more spiritual,
healthier way of living. Hollie tells us
that the “world needs more people like this, focused on the spiritual side of
who we are, why we exist. They’re so
completely on target about that. Gadgets
and stuff can so easily define us, pushing us onto one treadmill after
another.” Part of her frustration may be
born from the disease she is fighting but there is a perspective for all of us
here.
If the reader is looking to pick
up a story for superficial reading, this books could serve that purpose. However, there is so much more here that
reading without thinking would be a waste.
This is a book to be read, savored, enjoyed, and used as a source of
meditation and reflection. We can only
hope that there will be sequels.
Disclosure of Material
Connection: This book was received for free from the publisher for the purpose
of review but a positive review was not required. The opinions expressed are those
of the reviewer. This disclosure is in accordance with the United States
Federal Trade Commission’s “Guides Concerning the
Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising” 16
CFR, Part 255.
See also http://www.estillyen.com/2013/11/25/review-roy-d-wallen/
See also http://www.estillyen.com/2013/11/25/review-roy-d-wallen/